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Airwave Prayers |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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If this is Sunday morning and we’re still headed North, then please grant us some Neil Young, not the raw, scratchy Neil of Saturday night when we crushed new creases into upholstery, but an ethereal hymn to suit these redwoods, this foggy road; and, if it isn’t asking too much, bless us with a Sandy Denny tune to wonder where time goes, how it doesn’t matter to you if I’ve aged or how I’m still afraid of bridges; something to match a Mendocino sky. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but an ethereal hymn to suit these redwoods, this foggy road; ~*~ Well dang girl, you're back and now I'm not missing you any longer, just my HOME... oh, yes, there are places and spaces of California that I would love to visit again...but if I were to come home to see family, I would most CERTAINLY have to see ALL of my California friends AND POETS! And as for your comment in Willow? Darlin' girl, coming from you? I'm blushing. Because I know I've been blessed...thank you for that... and thank you for sending me home again. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes, you would have to visit all of your Cali friends and family! Willow? Some might fine poetry, lady, mighty fine! Blushin's good for the skin, don't 'ya know? heeee! And thank you. And you're welcome! Corinne |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Fun to read. I enjoyed it. I could almost hear the music. Susan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, another beauty from you Corinne... Thank you! Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Can't go wrong with a Neil Young tune.  Awesome write. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"and, if it isn’t asking too much, bless us with a Sandy Denny tune to wonder where time goes, how it doesn’t matter to you if I’ve aged or how I’m still afraid of bridges;" such should be the gift to you..and all..to know always enjoy Cor.. always you have a way of winding those words ontot he page that leaves me not only feeling them, but thinking about what it is I feel and why... thank you for the gift... the gift of words.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Always ... always enjoying the share of your thoughts~ All settled in the new digs ? Love ya' *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Susan, DarkAngel, Chris! Ah Ron, thank you for such warm words of encouragement! Hey lady! Thank you! - Yep, now the real work begins -- lots of TLC needed in this house! Corinne |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great poem, Corinne! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the feel of this... |
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