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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2004-04-08 07:37 PM

If this is Sunday morning
and we’re still headed North,
then please grant us some Neil Young,

not the raw, scratchy Neil of Saturday night
when we crushed new creases into
upholstery,
but an ethereal hymn to suit these redwoods,
this foggy road;

and, if it isn’t asking too much,
bless us with a Sandy Denny tune
to wonder where time goes,
how it doesn’t matter to you if I’ve aged
or how I’m still afraid of bridges;

something to match a Mendocino sky.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-08 07:58 PM

but an ethereal hymn to suit these redwoods,
this foggy road;

~*~

Well dang girl, you're back and now I'm not missing you any longer, just my HOME...

oh, yes, there are places and spaces of California that I would love to visit again...but if I were to come home to see family, I would most CERTAINLY have to see ALL of my California friends AND POETS!

And as for your comment in Willow? Darlin' girl, coming from you?

I'm blushing. Because I know I've been blessed...thank you for that...

and thank you for sending me home again.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2004-04-08 08:08 PM

Yes, you would have to visit all of your Cali friends and family!

Willow? Some might fine poetry, lady, mighty fine! Blushin's good for the skin, don't 'ya know? heeee!

And thank you. And you're welcome!

Corinne

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-04-08 08:19 PM

Fun to read. I enjoyed it. I could almost hear the music.

Susan

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-04-08 10:55 PM

Oh, another beauty from you Corinne... Thank you!

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-04-08 10:59 PM

Can't go wrong with a Neil Young tune.

Awesome write. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2004-04-09 07:57 AM

"and, if it isn’t asking too much,
bless us with a Sandy Denny tune
to wonder where time goes,
how it doesn’t matter to you if I’ve aged
or how I’m still afraid of bridges;"

such should be the gift to you..and all..to know

always enjoy Cor.. always

you have a way of winding those words ontot he page that leaves me not only feeling them, but thinking about what it is I feel and why... thank you for the gift... the gift of words..

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-04-09 09:32 AM

Corinne~
Always ... always enjoying the share of your thoughts~

All settled in the new digs ?
Love ya'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2004-04-10 11:37 AM

Thank you Susan, DarkAngel, Chris!

Ah Ron, thank you for such warm words of encouragement!

Hey lady! Thank you! - Yep, now the real work begins -- lots of TLC needed in this house!

Corinne

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-04-11 01:30 AM

Great poem, Corinne!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-04-11 04:47 AM

love the feel of this...

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