Open Poetry #31 |
In Search of Tranquility |
Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ We silently sail through sunshine in search of tranquility lost. Desparately seeking the echo of sound to slowly trail to a whisper. Descending into a peaceful pitfall. We go together. ^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that, "a peaceful pitfall" very interesting as is the rest of this little poem....enjoyed. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes! The "search for tranquility lost"! You have some very interesting expressions in this unique little poem! EA |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*~Thankyou both~*^ I appreciate all of the responses!! ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
We go together... a delightful thought. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Love it Kicking Dave |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ Glad you all enjoyed! ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kim -- I really liked your unique style with this one! ......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is very quiet and calm softly done just right |
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