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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-04-08 05:07 AM


Slow fine rain flecked
my jacket, sun still streamed.
Rainbow rising high above me,
soft April rain refreshing my face.

Clouds dark purple,
like bruises in the sky
raced past, setting sail
into the distance.

Flowers of spring opened.
Daffodils and Tulips,
golden yellow with emerald stems.
The beat of spring moves faster.

Through all of this i stand,
uncertain of my future.
Waiting, ever waiting,
but still happy, still loving.


''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (04-08-2004 07:20 AM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2004-04-08 07:03 AM


Slow fine rain flecked
my jacket, sun still streamed.
Rainbow rising high above me,
sofy April rain refreshing my face

nature paints a marvelous painting, the warmth of a fresh spring rain, how magnificant!

Lovely!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-04-08 07:08 AM


I love April showers...brings forth May Flowers...and newness, of spring....when all becomes renewed once again..

Lovely descriptions...such a lovely painted
view you have painted....full of hope and beauty!

~ARh
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2004-04-08 07:22 AM


Lee thank you for your reply....i love writing about the elements...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-04-08 07:24 AM


ARH thank you for your kind reply..beauty in all of its' forms is what i search for....

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2004-04-08 05:40 PM


Hello Phil

You paint the most beautiful pictures with your words.  I wish for you an Easter filled with much love and happiness.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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