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Open Poetry #31

Are We Stronger?

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-04-08 02:09 PM

How long will this go on?
Ah, we don't get much stronger.
I don't know how to breathe,
Without you by my side,
Around my lungs a barbed wire wreath.
Nothing's getting through to me...paralyzed,
All my surroundings slowly fade,
Sick of my life...hypnotized.
Awaken myself another day,
With you gone I'd slowly decay,
Lay me tender under the front lawn.
How long will this go on?
Are we a bit much stronger?

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-04-08 02:11 PM

Well, I do hope your love is stronger!
Another great write - enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-04-08 02:24 PM

Yet another tender one from your pen Kyle.
Personally..I'm sure it will grow stronger.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2004-04-08 03:15 PM

oh wow hey guys i wasnt expecting any replies till tomorrow lol...thanks

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

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