Open Poetry #31 |
Are We Stronger? |
Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
How long will this go on? Ah, we don't get much stronger. I don't know how to breathe, Without you by my side, Around my lungs a barbed wire wreath. Nothing's getting through to me...paralyzed, All my surroundings slowly fade, Sick of my life...hypnotized. Awaken myself another day, With you gone I'd slowly decay, Lay me tender under the front lawn. How long will this go on? Are we a bit much stronger? Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well, I do hope your love is stronger! Another great write - enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yet another tender one from your pen Kyle. Personally..I'm sure it will grow stronger. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
oh wow hey guys i wasnt expecting any replies till tomorrow lol...thanks Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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