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Rdz9
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0 posted 2004-04-07 06:15 PM


So tired of being away from you
All I want is to feel you near me now
Is our love destined to always be true
I want to see you always, and right now

Departing from that place so long ago
I never thought that I'd be so far gone
It seems eternal years have passed, I know
But I should be home now, before too long

Will you promise to be there to hold me
I want to hold you always in my arms
And wipe cold tears off of your face
Hold you close, and safe from harm

It is so lonely here without you now
I want to hold you forever somehow.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

© Copyright 2004 Rob - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-04-07 07:38 PM


Very loving thoughts. Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-04-07 09:14 PM


The longing of this piece came through clearly.
TD

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2004-04-08 12:12 PM


I love sonnets...........

Juju

Rdz9
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4 posted 2004-04-08 01:01 AM


Wonder if I got the format right... and Thank you for the compliments.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-08 04:25 AM


a sad but beautiful write
Suetang
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6 posted 2004-04-08 05:42 PM


Hi Rob

Beautiful words of love and longing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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