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Loneliness - Sonnet
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Loneliness - Sonnet |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
So tired of being away from you All I want is to feel you near me now Is our love destined to always be true I want to see you always, and right now Departing from that place so long ago I never thought that I'd be so far gone It seems eternal years have passed, I know But I should be home now, before too long Will you promise to be there to hold me I want to hold you always in my arms And wipe cold tears off of your face Hold you close, and safe from harm It is so lonely here without you now I want to hold you forever somehow. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very loving thoughts. Enjoyed. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The longing of this piece came through clearly. TD |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I love sonnets........... Juju |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Wonder if I got the format right... and Thank you for the compliments. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a sad but beautiful write |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Rob Beautiful words of love and longing. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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