Open Poetry #31 |
My favourite colour... |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Remember my unsightly shade of pale how it may come and go a silent reverse into skin back to where... you simply were not. Remember this is no reflection of you... this float without feet you cannot put your foot down and make me stop for I am already grounded... somewhere Knowing I'm in mind yours alone... significant enough to scratch ink across any blank page fills me black my most beautiful colour. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Knowing I'm in mind yours alone... significant enough to scratch ink across any blank page fills me black my most beautiful colour." WOW Gemma!! This is fantastic. Another keeper for my library. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Beautiful, Gemma! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, my, WOW |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
significant enough to scratch ink across any blank page fills me black my most beautiful colour. A perfect explanation of poetry's release Ms W. Kerr |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Gemma! Thank you sharing such a wonderful piece of writing with us. Happy Easter! Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gem, my pet, your mind works in ingenious ways! I always read your poems at least twice ~ to digest and assimilate them! Huggums, Linda |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
it's always a pleasure to read you Gem... I think I shall keep this Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
my favorite color too... wonderful write *s M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
the power of the lexis in any shade you make the soul run away to be by itself and think... |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Gem...... the lines in italics..... how if may come and go this float without feet somewhere fills me black A poem within a poem........ love it Words are my medicine. |
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