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Willow Songs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Willow Songs In the dawning of the fourth month, It is willow’s time to dress again, As she slip-streams yellow green of Sheer. But she waits, I know, As tender leaves lift in wind, For the time When summer ascends, And she becomes lush and lusty With cicada sounds When she shall shade, in shadow, her lovers of summer. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, I marvel at your depiction of the willow. You have such artistic vision. Sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"When summer ascends, And she becomes lush and lusty With cicada sounds When she shall shade, in shadow, her lovers of summer." Love this keeper Karilea.. The willow, especially in summer is one of my favourites. They remind me so much of a strong person... they can bend but do not break. Beautiful write...has me smiling.  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect April write Karilea. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
When she shall shade, in shadow, her lovers of summer. Karilea, a warming write. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very nice reminder of the warmth coming soon. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You make me long for the shade of the willow. Mmmmm. Nice. Susan |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"And she becomes lush and lusty With cicada sounds" LOVE that description! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
When she shall shade, in shadow, her lovers of summer''' ~~ along the marsh, (at the beach) my second home the willow trees were as beautiful as you have set them here....such calming memories from this, thank you sunny lady... ~~**~~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hmmmm this is just so beautiful, Karilea I want to be there...Sheesh I'm gonna miss summer HUMPH! it's a keeper...to keep me warm for aour coming winter brr. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hello Karilea! Finally finished with our move -- tired, exhausted, broke, but happy! As she slip-streams yellow green of Sheer -- that is a fine, fine line, my dear. Pure poetry. Corinne |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful and o so true about those shade trees, let's preserve them and hold onto them |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
I love Willows.......wonderful write......enjoyed sooo much Words are my medicine. |
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