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As Darkness Fell
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As Darkness Fell |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As Darkness Fell Even though you may not see, the depth I find in you can overwhelm my senses, make the sky a bluer blue. When the stars come out to shine remember I, this night. Silent thoughts speak through these lips, uncertainty put right. Though time is not a measure nor chains enough to hold, it's moments like the unexpected that make the new of old... Reflecting back to all that is, I understand of time. Although elusive it can be, that tree's still there to climb.  Thanks~M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-07-2004 12:19 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Though time is not a measure nor chains enough to hold, it's moments like the unexpected that make the new of old..." Very cool stanza.  How you doing?"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M, your poem is absolutely beautiful and is a reflection of your own beautiful soul. I sense tranquility in your words. Loves 'n hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning Susan..I am doing better than yesterday...so that is a "good thing" how about you? M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, Linda..I am on the edge of tranquility today~~~ hoping it lasts awhile Thank you for your kind words  M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Such beautiful poetry! JL  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am glad today is better than yesterday.. I am good, tired...moving this weekend. Starting new..again..lol "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hoping that it lasts...it looks good on you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
to know that after all youve been through, that you can say "that tree's still there to climb" means that you are a fighter! Not only do you revel in beauty but you aspire to "climb it"! Tranquility has been there all along sweet friend, waiting to ambush you |
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