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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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Finally the crying has passed. Though each day and every minute I look backwards hoping longing to see you running towards me again. But each time my eyes glance back and take another look at you the smallest part of my idle hopes crunches when it sees you running ... away from me. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"when it sees you running ... away from me." ^*-Zenny-*^ Wow...did not expect this end at all. Very powerful write here. A sense of impending doom crept up within this poem, however I hope that this isn't really the case with it. Wonderful write!!  ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Love is often so sad.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh zenny, this aches |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hi Zenny Please refer back to A Cure For High Blood Pressure. Will be back later. Have to run. Bonnie  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the rear view is not always pleasant good emoting, zenny |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ouch..ouch... ..heres to looking forward instead..  |
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