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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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It happened just as you feared, And now you can’t sleep at night. You’ve grown accustomed to my beard And the hat that I wear to the side. It was simpler then. We were distant. Three rows separated our seats And you turned your head every instant That our careless gazes would meet. I was then too shy to approach you. I considered you out of my league. From the back of the classroom, I watched you And studied your stunning physique. And we couldn’t have imagined it ever That we’d fall in love, on a whim, That we’d end up happy together, That you’d have to explain it to him. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good luck |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very good write here. Caught me off guard at the ending.  Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done..best of luck to you and the lucky lady. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this. I knew I would when I saw your name in the poetry list. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrey~ It seems a soft whisper of time~ Lovely ... but it needs a name ... how's about - This Whimsical Love ? So good to read you, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
loved it  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
enjoyed |
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