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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

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0 posted 2004-04-05 02:29 PM

Accountability has need to give voice
to any and all wrongdoings of mine
but the immensity of the task
has far outweighed
my vocabulary.

Repentance reaches to Redeemer
but with the piles of soil
my voice is swept under the rug and
sorrow steps heavily
on my tongue.

When my words are not able
my eyes know just what to say,
by Grace the Lord understands
my fluid dialect and sin
by sin they are wept away.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (04-06-2004 01:59 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-05 02:33 PM

You're tugging on me, dear,
and I would lift the weight
if I could...
I would indeed...

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2004-04-05 02:48 PM

I have one word...Grace...am blessed with foregiveness by Grace and by Grace am given good friends....
hugs

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-04-05 03:05 PM

SweetJellyGirl~
This is a gentle reminder to us ALL ...
that He is always there with forgiveness~
ALWAYS~

Loving you ... holding you in prayerful thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-04-05 03:09 PM

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-04-05 06:31 PM

lovely sweetheart

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-04-05 06:50 PM

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

7 posted 2004-04-05 06:57 PM

By far the best poem I've ever read... seriously! A keeper!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-04-05 10:44 PM

outstanding write. I liked your play on the word fluent/fluid. Good message. I enjoyed the depth and quality of this immensely.
Sadie

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2004-04-06 02:46 AM

beautiful...you are

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

10 posted 2004-04-06 05:57 AM

"sorrow steps heavily
on my tongue"

Beautiful write..I really loves this line.
You write with great passion..
looking forward to reading more!

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

11 posted 2004-04-06 01:57 PM

thank you all...*smile*...just wanted to find a way to say that sometimes tears, are a good thing

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-04-07 05:08 PM

When my words are not able
my eyes know just what to say,
by Grace the Lord understands
my fluid dialect and sin
by sin they are wept away.

What an outstanding portrait of faith and forgiveness... Excellent work! *S*

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

13 posted 2004-04-07 09:35 PM

incredible write!

let the tears flow....we'll be here with a tissue

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