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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-04-06 05:09 PM


I walk the streets
I look at the night
I look at the cold
Such a pretty sight
Teach me heart
It's all that matters
Teach my life
It's not in shatters
Let the rain
Make me whole again
Let the truth
wash away my pain

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Nothing personal of course - a responce to a talented lady called Claudia


Dave

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-04-06 06:51 PM


Heartfelt, warm and sincere.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2004-04-08 06:39 AM


the wonderment and realization of your thoughts stem into a future of being...I believe that's the best part of life for me...the unknowing, but the touch of it all.  Tremendous write.
DavePage
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3 posted 2004-04-08 07:49 PM


Claudia was an amazing and very talented writer

She wrote verses of the tango that should be immortal.

I am sorry that for whatever reasons, she stopped writing.

Dave

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