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Aimster
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0 posted 2004-04-06 09:23 AM


My life has always been like a book
Divided by chapters, as the pages turn
Now I sit here thinking for a moment
Reflecting on what I've learned

There is a reason for everything
Even when the reason hurts us deep
There are just some things not worth worrying over
No sense in losing sleep

The truth is always in front of us
Sometimes though we don't want to see
The battle is long, and sometimes we don't win
It's not about that though, it's about loving yourself in the end

Moments pass so quickly
We think the years will continue on and on
Before we know it though, we've come to the end
As our lives are just touching love songs

I'm learning just to live in the moment
Let the world continue in a hurry around me
I'm going to stop right here for a second
It's nice to just be...

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2004 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-04-06 09:31 AM


So true, Dear Amy! Zen is in! lol


Linda

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-04-06 09:33 AM


I'm learning just to live in the moment
Let the world continue in a hurry around me
I'm going to stop right here for a second
It's nice to just be...

excellent prose

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3 posted 2004-04-06 09:56 AM


Into my library this one goes!
Awesome. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Kicking Kim
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4 posted 2004-04-06 10:12 AM


^*~Aimster~*^
What a beautiful poem.
This was straight from the heart,
lets all be glad just to be!

^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^


^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2004-04-06 10:28 AM


to "just be" I so admire that beautiful pretty lady...missed your smile around here...

~~**~~
Like the sound of silence calling,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream.
Like the echoes of our souls are meeting
~

Grover
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6 posted 2004-04-06 02:35 PM


Very good poem. Warm, honest and sincere!
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-04-06 04:45 PM


It's nice to just be...

Yes it is isn't it dear?
A lovely write hon

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

ParisGrl
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8 posted 2004-04-06 08:36 PM


Amy,

Hey you!  Its great to read your poetry again.  I love this poem.  I can relate to it so much.

Take Care,
~Laura~

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2004-04-06 10:57 PM


yes its nice to just be sometimes isnt it?
passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-04-07 03:24 AM


a lesson worth learning
ParisGrl
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11 posted 2004-04-07 11:08 AM


Amy, I know this is late but Happy Birthday.
JL
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12 posted 2004-04-07 11:12 AM


This is an excellent write!  So perceptive.
JL

Aimster
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13 posted 2004-04-07 11:19 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful
replies...it's good to see you all
again as well. My time is limited these
days, but I sure am glad I got the
chance to stop in. Who knows, maybe I'll
write another poem soon.

Thanks Laura for remembering my Bday
Take care of yourselves.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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14 posted 2004-04-07 11:27 AM



What a wonderful write, Amy!
Happy Birthday to you! BE

I enjoyed reading these words of wisdom.

vandana
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15 posted 2004-04-08 08:50 PM


nice read
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