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Dont tell anyone - another Hawk
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Dont tell anyone - another Hawk |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Have you thought about a diet? Your gut needs some exercise! Get out my gut and I will weigh a lot less I am only an image Why You wont allow me and work to support you you say words into my mind No-one can hear! Why me?! Music and the trees tell me to take that step but why me You tell me they don't matter not to consider them Without them I have no vision Without you I dont live Without them I dont exist Why You have the world to choose Why should I ever feature on your horizon You dont know You dont understand What are you but a fool Who wouldn't know a meal If he didn't faint Why would I choose you You care You allowed me to rest Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating! You have the world to choose Why should I ever feature on your horizon Why? Because you glow on that horizon, evidently! Love, Margherita  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
That's the word I'd use as well-- captivating. As usual, good write Dave. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Interesting interior dialogue, you made me think. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I suppose I was trying to highlight the dialogue of two people who have made contact and now start arguing about the sofa, the kitchen, friends and who controls Thanks all dave |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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