Open Poetry #31 |
I wrote this originally as Ignorance - it became the Stone |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I will freely admit I chickened out on this It is like the Mountain's singing to me of a need for care, and was consigned for my lack of guts in not publishing the real words It became the Stone, and the Stone will always stand on it's hill and remind me! Dave ************************************************** Ignorance Rippling chimes of wind Whistle oblivion to persona Preserving ego and façade Of moments of pleasure That courage regrets Enjoying Crescendo The activity of magic Seeking exaltation And fear Doomed to wander the world with the power Of ignorance and to propagate it To inanimately pulse life To goals Reminded by the future Foretold by the past Described by the present Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Hey, this is great Dave! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To inanimately pulse life To goals Reminded by the future Foretold by the past Described by the present Awesome David, simply awesome! |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"Reminded by the future Foretold by the past Described by the present" I simply loved this section. It is oh so true, the future reminds us that we're still here... we still have dreams... and that they may come true! ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Dave |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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