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Going South
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Going South |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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We are intimately bound by an arch of molecules Once met, an ultimate connection Collection of sensations, images presented By an attempt to hold on to romance We went south in the past, but… Necessity might cause us to meditate the account There is a factor of integrity, sincerely relevant! We must disconnect from yesterday’s mask Accomplish the revolution, cause in your heart, you have Known autumn days were cold…there will be more. But, orchards spring up at your feet, offering shoes Hard to 2nd guess remembering, isn’t it? Consider merely expressions of love… Forgiveness and the depth of falsehoods Remember to forget…. regardless of the outcome The vexed questions, relent… Recount various ways of rock, the bite of wind Then, warm your heart with hues of color, where time begins Moonlight, love, and mysterious things, warmth of fire Discern issues at hand, not to little, nor too much Cause when it’s all over, honey, all there is, is Love. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
We are intimately bound by an arch of molecules Once met, an ultimate connection Collection of sensations, images presented By an attempt to hold on to romance We went south in the past, but… Necessity might cause us to meditate the account There is a factor of integrity, sincerely relevant! We must disconnect from yesterday’s mask Lee J., I like very much how you worded this. Your thinking and expression always captivate some small part of me, take me back to some experience... Thank you for your analytical, poetic thoughts. Sadie |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Recount various ways of rock, the bite of wind Then, warm your heart with hues of color, where time begins Moonlight, love, and mysterious things, warmth of fire Discern issues at hand, not to little, nor too much Cause when it’s all over, honey, all there is, is Love.'''' ~~ this flows so beautifully and the ending is perfect Lee....almost reads like a song..  ~~**~~ The sound of silence calls, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream The echo of our souls meet ~~**~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful Lee J. JL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ True and a delight to read,  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, so true and if you ever go south, drop me a line |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good morning everyone, thanks so much for your kind comments. If you don't already know, please allow me to clarify. When we here in PA speak of a relationship going south, it means, it went bad. I was thinking of all those who've experienced sour grapes so to speak...with their mates, husbands, wives...etc. Thanks a bunch for taking the time to read and your generous comments, wishing you and yours a very Happy Easter Holiday. Love and hugs...Lee J. |
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