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Lady Wordsmith
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0 posted 2004-04-05 04:01 PM




you take the words I need
write them so carelessly
what matters to you these gems
I tend so ferociously?

spewed from your heedless lips
your inflated ego succumbs
to spit out in poet's haste
these verses as unwanted crumbs

treat these words carefully
take pains with each precious jewel
for in spilling them unwisely
tis you that's painted the fool


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-04-05 04:03 PM


treat these words carefully
take pains with each precious jewel
for in spilling them unwisely
tis you that's painted the fool

~*~

Welcome to Passions!  I have felt these very words come forth from my own soul...so I am going to look forward to what the Lady Wordsmith has to say in days to come.


Grover
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2 posted 2004-04-05 04:05 PM


Well, quite the first post... excellent work! Welcome to PIP!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-04-05 04:10 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Loved your entrance post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

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Gaia
4 posted 2004-04-05 04:15 PM


a write with bite, LOL
Welcome to Passions!

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5 posted 2004-04-05 04:20 PM


I like midnight's description, 'a write with a bite'......enjoyed this...welcome
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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-04-05 04:28 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
Have fun here.  Chris

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7 posted 2004-04-05 05:49 PM


LadyWordsmith~



Here's to knowing you ... enjoy the circle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

1slick_lady
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8 posted 2004-04-05 05:52 PM


ouch...and welcome to our passion..helen
DavePage
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9 posted 2004-04-05 05:59 PM


Venom kissed a thousand lips to bless a word

repeated until a thousand lips bled

to sacrifice

an altar

grooved

to demonstrate

blood's requirements

and stone

to dictate the words

that others

might call passion

Dave

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By the Seaside
10 posted 2004-04-05 07:31 PM


I for one, have painted some pretty sloppy stuff.
But in the process I learned to recognize fine art.

To err is human, to forgive is devine.

Welcome to Passions Lady Wordsmith~

  

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2004-04-05 07:46 PM


Oh I can see you are a fine addition to the Passions family!

Welcome!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Lady Wordsmith
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12 posted 2004-04-05 11:11 PM


Thank you for your kind welcome. I have enjoyed reading here for some time and thus today decided to post.
aujussy wolf
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13 posted 2004-04-06 02:21 AM


ahhhh the last word
interesting point of view ...i like the edge you write with , welcome
: ) wolfy

.......
JDW III

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displaced
14 posted 2004-04-06 02:22 AM


welcome to Passions
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In Your Poetic Mind
15 posted 2004-04-06 10:33 PM


Welcome to Passions....

beautiful!


~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Goldenrose
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16 posted 2004-04-07 06:35 AM


Welcome to Passions....enjoyed your post here...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

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