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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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blank pages, smooth glass ponds soft, letter-ripple, middle, fade red blood pumps -stops- breath pen prick the forehead tease the white is every color laid bare, the fire blackened page consumes every wrinkle in the brain balled pink in slow distilment abstract wracked against unreal no, the scuttling gray has made the ozone rich so two pins miss the monitor all is right on left again |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thats why my poetry paper is bright green, no wrinkles in the brain for me........ wait I take that back..... wrinkles are good.... \ Juju |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
great read i am glad i found this one made me smile thanks  -wolf |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Walt I hate those damn crashes too. But I try and stay away from the,"red blood pumps -stops- breath pen prick the forehead tease" My blood pressure you know? Good metaphorical write about frustration Walt Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 missed your writings! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All is Write when Walt is here... welcome home, Sir... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Whoooooooo-dat? Way-far-out... Nice to see you and your fine work, sir Walt...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
abstract wracked against unreal no, the scuttling gray has made the ozone rich all is right on left again I can remember once, when I didn't know which was which??? hehehehhe This was a tremendous write, enjoyed very much |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
i like it alot because i can't figure it out. what about this...let her ripple, a forehead named prick, this girl named page consumes pinky's brain, and all have left the right wing party ...i like yours better |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey there Walty, yanno... we need to read more of you bud. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Walt!! So good to read you again! ~Smiles & Easter Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello my friend! Good to see you posting! Have a wonderful Easter. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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