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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Swapping I swapped a skies aura’s view Took a trail of rainbows hue Saw the treasure of my mind Who could know that I was blind? I left the heaven of my day Walked the rainbow all the way Did not find a treasures gold Found a peacock cold and old The treasure was a mirrors view Of something worn and full of rue A view of misty vanity Reflections of insanity The eyes were hollow full of pain Compressions of a one-way lane The dance macabre danced a fife Of wasted time that was a life For I have played the game of pride And now became its loving bride. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (04-06-2004 07:56 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You bring a touch of heaven to every day, Sy...  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is wonderful Sy.....very very well done.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I got so scared Sy when I got to this part.. "The treasure was a mirrors view Of something worn and full of rue A view of misty vanity Reflections of insanity" I thought you'd written a verse about me and early morning rising........ Relieved I went on to read that it was just another good poem by Sy Tabin and not telling the truth about Eric..... Thanks Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy spring morning, Sir Tumbleweed! I do believe that you have ample reason to be as proud as a peacock ~ and one that is warm and with a spirit as young as the babe that you are! May you find a pot of gold and happiness at every rainbows end!  Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
An intriquing write Sy. I'll mull this over some more. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It's always such a pleasure to awaken and read what you have left for us each morning Sy! You are such an excellent writer. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies you have to meet with midnight moths.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We've got to keep Randy from barking up the wrong tree, Sy...it's a beautiful day and you're still writing poetry... that's all I need to start my day right! Thank you for your many gifts!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A very profound and captivating read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Thoroughly enjoyed!!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"For I have played the game of pride And now became its loving bride." lol...if you are bride than I am it's adoring love slave... Excellent.. and Good Morning! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I really enjoyed your imagery. The mood, well, I enjoyed it too but it left me with tens of questions. You can't know how much your writing is valued and enjoyed. Good morning to you. Sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan You are a taste of heaven. Toerag You having one of those days? LOL Thank you my friend. ethome, We all see something different in the mirror. LOL Have a good one. Earth Angel, You play the Angel so well.  scorpio, It is a think poem, thank you my friend. Nancy, You are the sweet in my tea. Sunshine And you know you start my day to. LeeJ And the top of the morning to you my dear. Susan, LOL you are the sweetest. Sadie, Morning dear, it is a think poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very enjoyable read Seymour...Thank you. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the comment. |
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