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Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-04-05 08:09 PM

User

tricks for cocaine and speed
she cranks the rushing feed
she fills the empty need--

of phony lovers
for $50 hits

her sunshine stole away
daytime became her enemy
night became her only friend
her only relative

where's our sister now?
where's our daughter now?

©2004 Grover Gall

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-04-05 08:18 PM

Grover~
Intensely compelling read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-04-05 08:58 PM

Such a sad state of affairs...

Well done, Grover~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-04-05 09:03 PM

Grover,
Disturbing, but so true. You expressed this very well in about forty words. You hit raw emotion.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

4 posted 2004-04-05 09:50 PM

harsh to realize millions suffer so.

nice honest write.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-06 02:13 AM

you write of harsh reality...makes me feel better about being me

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-04-06 09:37 AM

I hope I never have to ask those questions...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-04-06 10:41 AM

very sad, when daylight is the enemy....

nicely said

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-04-06 04:03 PM

Well done Gover...
Hard to know whether to pray for dawn or dusk for these souls.
TD

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

9 posted 2004-04-06 04:41 PM

powerful write, this hits hard but
then again I'm sure you meant for it to!
Excellent...I'll be looking for more from
your pen.
Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2004-04-06 04:51 PM

enjoyed

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

11 posted 2004-04-07 02:40 AM

and the realization , its happening too often

Hope

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2004-04-07 06:06 PM

very true words of wisdom. thanks for sharing. enjoyed as i do all of your writings. marsha

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2004-04-07 07:30 PM

Enjoyed...James

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