Open Poetry #31 |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
If chosen differently, would my hand wrap around charcoal To produce simple, contrasting line With shades sifting just so, to hint the human soul? Would I have lived years there, instead of here, Missing grazing and raising of animals as they model unity, completeness, softness? There, I can readily imagine falling into conversations About rhythm, form, and shape with people of the trade, Totally immersed, exchanging loneliness to fulfilled sensations. Here, though isolated from community of artistic stimulation I think it is my place of being, of seeing how nature lives That inspires me to dream I’m a painter without any limitations. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Beautiful.. "I'm a painter without any limitations" This part really made me think it was a very philosophical line! I loved the way that this poem simply evolved and took a wander into dreamland ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweet one... You are a painter without limitations, no matter where your heart resides. TD |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"If chosen differently, would my hand wrap around charcoal To produce simple, contrasting line With shades sifting just so, to hint the human soul?" beautiful lines...enjoyed the entire poem, but loved this stanza. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, the sky is tall! paint away, dear poetess! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadySadie~ Just beautifully done~ Your word-art is a treasure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Would I have lived years there, instead of here, Missing grazing and raising of animals as they model unity, completeness, softness? all we have to do is but take a look around us... this was a georgeous read! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Here, though isolated from community of artistic stimulation I think it is my place of being, of seeing how nature lives That inspires me to dream I’m a painter without any limitations. Anything is possible, so long as we believe in it. Love your work Sadie~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful, Sadie -- and I really, really do understand! luv ya, jo |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Exquisite! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow wonderfully expressed ...I used to love painting through my growing up years but had low self-esteem all my life and family just put me down instead of encouraging ....years and years later the writing began to help build the self esteem .... now my visions go into words Hope |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thank you, Everyone for reading and commenting. I'll catch you at your posts. See you then. Sadie |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sadelite...I read you and see many contrasting images within your words. Simple at times and able to change in a second to serrious and very intune with yourself. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This made me think of cave drawings, Sadie... when one person first thought to leave behind what they saw. I am VERY impressed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful! I love the way you make the words dance. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As a painter of poetry, you are a literary artiste! EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I think it is my place of being, of seeing how nature lives That inspires me to dream I’m a painter without any limitations" Ahhh...and how blessed we are for your artisanship in the here and now...beautifully written...er...I mean...painted... |
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