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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The Counter I've oiled these machines a thousand times Chaff, cod, and herring Running sweetly as a song Severing bones, cleaning gullets Singing a long song Now they say old Not reliable any more I used these machines for years Never a bad result yet Always oiled regular Run like magic Just the ticket No-one respects age anymore Want electronic things How do I do my fish Do they think about such things ***************************************** The answer was yes They are needed for processing votes in the next elections Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This is a good write! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Dave, Your poems always provoke my thinking. I appreciate your creativity and depth. Sadie |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I was just going to say old is often better than the new , remained steadfast and true ..then I came to the end of the poem LOL Hey love your answer at the end .... Hope |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Grover Thanks Dave Sadelite Your poems always provoke my thinking. I appreciate your creativity and depth. Sadie Thanks Sadie it is appreciated dave HopeS There is so much talent Dave |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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