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Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

0 posted 2004-04-05 04:02 PM

A Simple Whisper

Sometimes I don't share my feelings,
Afraid of the love I'd reveal
But even if I haven't said it,
Baby, you know how I feel...
You're so Amazing
Your laughter, your brilliance, your style...
Are so Amazing
There's magic inside of your smile.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-04-05 04:08 PM

Thanks for sharing!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-04-05 04:09 PM

Do share more often...this is beautiful!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-04-05 04:12 PM

How lovely!!
Yes!! Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-04-05 04:50 PM

The smile showed here.
Enjoyed.
TD

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-04-05 05:01 PM

Very nice. enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-04-05 07:36 PM

Very nice...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-04-06 03:15 AM

that's sweet

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

8 posted 2004-04-06 05:59 AM

^*-Beautiful-*^
I really enjoyed the last line..
It held such an impact on the rest of the poem.
Wonderful, kind and sweet.

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

9 posted 2004-04-06 06:21 PM

A Simple Whisper
Can I suggest

Dave
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Love I'd reveal of a feeling that make's me afraid

You're so Amazing
Your laughter, your brilliance, your style...
Are so Amazing
There's magic inside of your smile.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

10 posted 2004-04-06 09:06 PM

I love this... its so sweet, and there has to be something magical about a smile, It is just sorta contagious.

Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

11 posted 2004-04-07 10:54 PM

Thank you so much for this amazing collection of compliments. I enjoyed reading your kind words and hope to supply you with many more in return over time.
Thanks
Andrew (Darker Season)

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