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Open Poetry #31
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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2004-04-04 01:00 AM


my tongue how it goes numb
around you my head how it
is full of love for you
my heart wont take part
in that toxicity you
out pour

my heart rembers all you
done and nothing more still
my mind is striving to get
adored with the one love
I want to explore

your mouth oh so close
to mine your touch
far away distance
the glare of love
in your eyes are no more

now my head is figuring
out why my heart wasnt
interested anymore

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
1 posted 2004-04-04 01:17 AM

i know this well,this was well written and to the point,i loved it.


"i'll give you my life cause i don't own anything.."
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-04-04 04:08 AM

head and heart...a universal theme

well done
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-04-04 04:26 AM

thank you
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