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Open Poetry #31

If Love were only a Dream

PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-04-03 12:40 PM

Oh if love were only in dreams,
and beauty, segments of thy mind,
I would have no life it seems,
nor would life, a meaning to find.

For what sorrow finds to this,
a world void of love and beauty;
loving hearts would surely miss-
and the world, would fail in duty.

Life is such a thing can't endure,
without beauty and love by her side,
for such a thing, my mind is sure,
and thy loveless heart tries to hide.

For this heart stripped bear, knows too well,
the forbidden secrets of the night;
that the dawn of day, marks love's farewell,
so forever shall I dream tonight.

But know this oh fleeting heart,
that if love were only a dream;
such a life, I too hastily part,
to a place where love reigns surpreme!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-04-03 08:06 AM

very lovely

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-04-03 02:04 PM

Splendid.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-04-03 09:37 PM

Nice poem!
-Juju

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-04-03 09:58 PM

Very nice indeed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

5 posted 2004-04-04 01:14 AM

When love lies in exhile chains, and the soulvoid is filled with hate, then what is left to celebrate?

Well written poem.

~Broken~

"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

6 posted 2004-04-04 01:15 AM

sweet
good write

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