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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-01-30 06:42 AM

White Sale

in cotton thoughts
I wander about
the thread count
and guess what
you are made of
just how tightly will
my dreams be held
do you give
a hundred percent
or are you
a cozy blend of
percale with polyester
will you split and fray
being irritant of pill
or shrink behind
the heat of time
a misfit in size
to bunch and pull
later will you fit
all the corners
smooth or slip up
without any give
sateen or egyptian
is there softness found
within the textile tactile
of the higher
you can count
for I am wrinkling
and no longer want
to be passively
unmade

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2004-01-30 10:07 AM

In a finite world, the infinite rarely is encountered. Maybe wrap yourself completely in whatever sheet you have. *smile*

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2004-01-30 10:49 AM

nice

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-01-30 10:53 AM

Excellent thoughts here Helen..
Much enjoyed as always.
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2004-01-30 11:39 AM

nicely done... white cotton can be warm or cold.. when you write it..it always has a warmth..

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-01-30 11:44 AM

1slick_lady
Now that is a high count cotton. LOL

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2004-01-30 11:44 AM

Now that's a fresh start to my morning. All said, this write brought with its tide cheer to my mood and made my thoughts... bounce.

A good

to you.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-30 12:54 PM

yeah, you and me both

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-30 12:59 PM

Nice, your language just keeps moving here...and the way you weave together your feelings w/ inventive imagery, spinning from your loom.. just beautifully. ~P

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