Open Poetry #31 |
Rare, this... |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rare, this gentle fall, Angel feathers, or perhaps, ~ Pillow fight flurries ~ Snowing as it is right now Leaving tracks on lonely minds |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
nice nice nice! i like the pillow fight part! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, how beautiful. *S* Your poem and picture team perfectly... wonderful! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Something to think about. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
rare? I think falling snow often leaves such traces on the mind... imagery is nice..and adds a softer element to the black and white of the image itself.. I enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely as a softly falling snowflake. Enjoyed this Karilea. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I have never lived where it snowed, but your poem makes me want to be there, even takes me there, but without the cold. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so pretty and playful, save for those lonely tracks~ Nice one Karilea~ |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I love the snow. A beautiful poem to go with a beautiful gift of nature! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That is the coolest picture Karilea. They look like little space ships landing... OK, now I'm really spaced out... lol A beautiful thought! Thanks for sharing this with us, Richy |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very beautiful, Karilea. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunshine, I really like this verse, and the picture, too. Hugs Ethel |
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Rockfish New Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 5 |
you can follow those... pick a flake out then follow it down those are the introspective snows nicely done |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Interesting picture! I sure like the pillow fight idea....but I see lanterns...~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me long to pillow fight again |
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