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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
I must not let this keep me down immersed in embers standing shivering staggering fearlessly, allowing this sun to become reality. Fevering with this holy experience grasping mortality as I touch infinity Life is to short to lend it to me but I'm locked up inside you kindling your stability severing your desires which once had saturated You're swaying from this comfortable degree, illuminating your serenity that can't bring comfort to me. Frolicking your fallacies as gaping entities swallow your contingencies I'm Perpetually mining, obliterating your sovereignty, your solace I've swindled by stifling your sensitivity. Everything is so intricate, and you're lying so desolate, I'm leading you to concede within your territory I've deranged this arbitrary harmony You would be amazed at what I found the inverse of my reality is my mortality Amazingly dumbfounded So obscure as she fell and found a boundary As my limit reaches infinity I strive into my eternity and strike you down This is my infidelity I am beyond infinity |
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Fisherman Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 46 |
interesting write. enjoyed. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
 nice images. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Life is to short to lend it to me but I'm locked up inside you kindling your stability severing your desires which once had saturated You're swaying from this comfortable degree, illuminating your serenity that can't bring comfort to me. Frolicking your fallacies as gaping entities swallow your contingencies I'm Perpetually mining, obliterating your sovereignty, your solace I've swindled by stifling your sensitivity." Some great lines/verses in this and I enjoyed the style of your writing also. Nice to meet/read ya...  |
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