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In Love Alone
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In Love Alone |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Oh ! My love this distance dares To shred our hearts with rips and tears The strongest mountain only stands Till time alone brings it to sands Out of sight, you often find Is also out of love and mind Will I then fade to shades of naught Vaguely seen in seldom thought Will the fire become a coal And flicker out to leave a hole An empty place to hide the pain Where lonely teardrops fall like rain A reaching hand with none to hold A dream to shiver in the cold Time and distance, do not wait For man to carve his own true fate It peels away the layers of love It clouds the mind and skies above To hide the sun, and hide the heart Love cannot live too long apart Come to me, cross time and space Let my eyes reflect your face Let my heart beat near your own Leave me not in love alone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful piece....love the ending lines there |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Precious words, beautiful flow. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Out of sight, you often find Is also out of love and mind Will I then fade to shades of naught Vaguely seen in seldom thought" Generally speaking, I'm not much for rhyme but I liked this. Cool title too. Nice to meet/read ya zippi...  |
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