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zippi
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since 2004-03-31
Posts 56
California

0 posted 2004-04-03 09:34 AM



Oh ! My love this distance dares
To shred our hearts with rips and tears
The strongest mountain only stands
Till time alone brings it to sands
Out of sight, you often find
Is also out of love and mind
Will I then fade to shades of naught
Vaguely seen in seldom thought
Will the fire become a coal
And flicker out to leave a hole
An empty place to hide the pain
Where lonely teardrops fall like rain
A reaching hand with none to hold
A dream to shiver in the cold
Time and distance, do not wait
For man to carve his own true fate
It peels away the layers of love
It clouds the mind and skies above
To hide the sun, and hide the heart
Love cannot live too long apart
Come to me, cross time and space
Let my eyes reflect your face
Let my heart beat near your own
Leave me not in love alone

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2004-04-03 12:58 PM


wonderful piece....love the ending lines there
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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2 posted 2004-04-03 01:05 PM


Precious words, beautiful flow.
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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3 posted 2004-04-03 04:46 PM


"Out of sight, you often find
Is also out of love and mind
Will I then fade to shades of naught
Vaguely seen in seldom thought"

Generally speaking, I'm not much for rhyme but I liked this.  Cool title too.  Nice to meet/read ya zippi...  

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