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Neeraja
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0 posted 2004-03-31 06:01 AM


Mijn lief

if our tears

could build a bridge

we would be able

to walk

into eachothers arms....

and forget

there once was

a heartbreaking farewell

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-03-31 06:07 AM


Yes, and adding the sun on that bridge, how it would sparkle in rainbow colors!
Such longing!
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-03-31 06:35 AM



Ah Neeraja, I do understand.  And what Margherita said, such a beautiful reply.

I was recently advised never to say "goodbye" any more...only "later"...because one never knows the way of a heart, or of the fates....


passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-31 12:54 PM


sigh
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4 posted 2004-03-31 12:57 PM


whenever I am on the phone with my wife from work or wherever we NEVER say good-bye only "I love you and I'll see ya soon"

But I know what ya mean (sigh)

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-04-01 06:50 PM


Nice...James
Grover
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6 posted 2004-04-01 07:04 PM


Wonderful!
Neeraja
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7 posted 2004-04-03 10:03 AM


Thanks for all the sweet comments, it means a lot to me!


Fisherman
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8 posted 2004-04-03 02:34 PM


enjoyed. nicely expressed.
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