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alan6501
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0 posted 2004-04-02 04:30 PM


I lost myself in an abyss
It was ever so deep
But oh so shallow...

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It's been awhile since my last post. What do you guys think?
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-04-02 04:55 PM


I like it.  It made me think of a little
something I wrote yesterday...

quote:
New leaves
Turning, caught up in spin
Air playing tag with leaf tips
Yesterday’s matter
Scattered     mulched     forsaken
                    At least a grave
                    Holds bones


I'll look forward to a new post from you.
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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2 posted 2004-04-02 06:53 PM

I think you should post more often. Good write!
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-04-04 12:56 PM

thinking you got lost too long
time to resurface and have some fun
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-04 05:23 PM

good one
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