Running away from the nouse.

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Open Poetry #31

Running away from the nouse.

Daemonyin
Junior Member

since 2001-11-24

Posts 31

0 posted 2004-04-04 08:01 AM

run away home
treading softly 'till I'm alone.

walk on glass
step on me
avoiding the only path I've seen.

bled out too far
step onto stone...
turn around shame
...run away home.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-04-04 09:49 AM

Very sad write. Makes me feel lonely all of a sudden. Well done. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
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Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-04-04 12:10 PM

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-04-04 12:43 PM

Succinct

Encompasses a lot and expresses even more

dave

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-04-04 04:06 PM

Very touching lost and alone feeling to this.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-04 05:19 PM

sad...I like this

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