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I just wanted to thank people for their inspiration over the last few months |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I just wanted to thank people for their inspiration over the last few months. Dave *************************************************** Still early ideas from the writing ********************************** A mind demanded love. It ripped my guts taking my blood and life throwing my soul and held it with the essence dripping bleeding a sun across the visage of a world I didn’t know. Flourishing in dreams, I echo’d a vision. “A flush of swirling dress, mists the senses with rest, winds carry tales on high, one to learned men, and to those who bend, for pity they would aspire”. Inside my stomach she asked, why the hell do I get you? Get out of my gut then! Nice and warm in here! What the tree are you? Why don’t I get a woman blasting through my skull, screaming, crying, demanding, where? Look into the sky, blue and I like to sunbath. You will carry me until you find me! I like my shirt open! Do you like freqent stops? I have to get back to the village, I am danced! You are dancing with a hawk now, you don’t have ideas, you don’t have memories, you don’t have life, you dance with a hawk and dance you will. I . A sky of blue, green crops before me, stoney ground dried to foot marks, burnt tuffs of grass, burnt in memory of a light private place. What better place caressed a feeling. I thought you were born somewhere else! I am “The Hawk” and you are nothing but an image of something. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Interesting read. I'll be interested in seeing where this goes. SG |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dave: You wield power in your writes...very fresh...like newborn to you. The mind must think, and the heart must love...where the two combust births the soul... (just my own personal view) Genuine and robust write. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are quite welcome Dave...you have given me words of inspiration also.  M |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Dave, you're a roaring, rushing wind. Excellent composition ideas here! |
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