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Hello I'm Back |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Oh!Hi! I’m so glad I met up with you. I’m coming back from a long trip to let everyone know. I went down that road The narrow one The one less traveled You know the one I’m talking about. The beauty and peace you cannot imagine. No fear of being killed, robbed or cheated. Just like in The Garden of Eden Oh!My! You should see Oh!My gosh! Animals, the lion and the bear- Sleeping side by side A baby playing with a rattlesnake. I was so surprised and afraid for the child. I was told not to fear- No harm will come to this baby child. The old has been washed away- The new is what this beauty means No war, hate, fear or death- Only love, peace and security. In words that you will understand This is called Paradise Found No longer Paradise Lost. Join me won’t you Come! Lets go on a trip. Love Bon-Bon |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bonnie - I'll join you if you stay by me This is something I've just got to see. No war, no hate, no sickness either? Let's run, not walk, nor take a breather !! Great write! hugs, Chris |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Very inviting (all except the snakes!). Glad you're back and have invited us to this paradise! Enjoyed, Bonnie. Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, This was a delight to read. Good write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hey Bon...if you let me come, I'll give you my first born...hehehehehe lovely idea...great thoughts, enjoyed reading. Hugs Lee J. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Going on a trip with a spunky, perky poetess to Paradise Found, sounds like heaven to me!  Welcoming back hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
delightful! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
"No fear of being killed, robbed or cheated." Hey Bonnie this is a place I want to see !!! Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BonBon -- I'm packing my bags! Loved your journey here! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wait for me..i'll hail a taxi! lovely thoughts here Ms.BonBon  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Bon What a wonderful place, many gentle souls have dreamed it exists. It reminds me of the painting by Edward Hicks called "The Peaceable Kingdom" Around the edges of the painting is a poem...You can see this painting at... http://www.creativeprocess.net/resources/curideas/peaceable_kingdom.html I have been to the place you describe, for only moments of course...  It would be certainly enjoyable to stay, just think what poetry could be written in an atmosphere like that, the words that would come forth would rock the world, although yours here have shaken mine this morning... enjoyed ________ice ><> "The wolf shall live with the lamb, the leopard shall lie down with the kid, the calf and the lion and the fatling together, and a little child shall lead them. Isaiah 11:6" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm not (back)....but poems like this make me wish I were. Well done, Bon-Bon! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bon-Bon, this sounds like a wonderful path to take.  Hugs  Ethel |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful heart. Very nice Bonnie. JL  |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Oh my sweet Bonnie You have described heaven, or something very near. I want to go, Oh please, Oh please! Rene` |
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