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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-04-02 01:16 PM

She Said.......Hello

It was an incredible first word

a beginning
and a promise
blended into a breath
becoming a given pledge

creating paradise on earth

a coming home
a warmth
an opening
invitation to forever

creating paradise on earth

like the sound of angels wings
spirits of old welcoming new
a pronouncement of heart
pressed soft upon my hearing

creating paradise on earth

all she bestowed was a whisper of

eternal sun
a sanctuary for one’s soul
endless journeys into night
promises never to be forgotten

it was an incredible first word

~*~

Repost; slightly revised
04-02-04

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-04-02 01:25 PM

Lovely!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-04-02 01:26 PM

who knew so much could come from just one word

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2004-04-02 01:30 PM

She did indeed...

nice to read you again

regards
sudhir

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-04-02 02:06 PM

Very tender...very beautiful.
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-04-02 02:17 PM

This is a very precious and special occassion, lovely poem, which brought warmth and a smile.

I believe Sunshine, we both have grand children around the same age, mine is 18 mos. and she now says coke? She did say mama and dada before, but she's branching out...hehehehehee

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2004-04-02 02:22 PM

And then they grow into adults and you wonder when they'll be quiet again

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-04-02 02:29 PM

~ and "Hello" has never been expressed as eloquently as you have just done in writing this touching poem!

Hello to you both!

Linda

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-04-02 02:49 PM

I would simply like to say "beautiful". The words, the sense of wonder, the feel of warmth and the promise that it stirs. Mmmm, very nice.

Susan

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

9 posted 2004-04-02 02:50 PM

Karilea

Touching this grandma's heart, you are!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

10 posted 2004-04-02 05:00 PM

enjoyed

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2004-04-02 05:07 PM

So nice! Great write.
JL

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

12 posted 2004-04-02 05:26 PM

Awwww....how special and precious. A wonderful way to describe a first word.

A beautiful addition to the baby book.

Huggles, Marti

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2004-04-02 05:26 PM

Beautiful Karilea!
hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

14 posted 2004-04-02 06:22 PM

New beginnings are so beautiful. Good to read you again Karilea. xx

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