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You Are Gone
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You Are Gone |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
You came into my life like a bloom of fresh air You tantalised my mind but now you're not there. It only took a moment to realise that you were the one but I didn't catch you in time and when I arrived you'd gone. So now I'll only remember the spectrum of light you shone you awakened all of my senses and I wish to God you'd not gone. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Timing is everything. Perhaps the right time will come and you will be able to "catch" him in that time. Very moving write.  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad stuff, but still full of strength |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Strong and poignant expression of longings and of what might have been. really nice!  ~P |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks for sharing, Kim. A very good write! |
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