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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-04-01 11:25 PM

Another Friday
tiptoes over the horizon

in a month of fridays
spring now surpasses
the shadow of winter
yet stays uncertain
as the tentative skies
that still wear the
pictures of early april

one more friday
without making love
without touching
without your soul on mine

one more friday
rises to crescendo
then withers sadly
as the vague colored blossoms
that line the hungry branches
concurrenty falling victim
to the same rainstorms
that fill its hours of
hibernation as the trees
feign sleep but still dream

i wait for you,
the sungoddess
hoping you, the frozen tree
will reap of my light and
warm to my touch , before
this moment forever withers

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-02-2004 03:15 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-04-01 11:39 PM

Mish, this is far more beautiful and inviting than the title suggests.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-04-01 11:43 PM

thanks dear, but this frozen tree needs top billing to drive it home

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2004-04-02 12:26 PM

as the vague colored blossoms
that line the hungry branches
concurrenty falling victim
to the same rainstorms
that fill the hours of
hibernation as the trees
feign sleep but still dream
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh yes, the tree may be high and mighty,
but the natural beauty of wild flowers cannot be tamed.

Looking good on ya girlie~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-02 01:57 AM

sometimes you leave me speechless

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2004-04-02 04:38 AM

Spring's anticipation
lingers in the icy air,
as emerging blossoms
are wisked away all too soon
caught in northwind's turmoil.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-04-02 06:23 AM

thanks lori, yes you see the wildflower lives and thrives always, frozen tree or not

thanks dix, now start talking or writing , my little southern comfort

and you dear choshi,
yes, what can i say, you always see me

thanks

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2004-04-02 07:03 AM

Interesting!

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

8 posted 2004-04-02 07:07 AM

If the frozen tree were to see this,
I'm sure that its heart would melt!!

What a wonderful write.
Again I didn't expect this
from the title either!

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-04-02 01:17 PM

and you dear choshi,
yes, what can i say, you always see me
thanks

Of course, Inked One.....You are always willing to reveal yourself lucidly, poignantly, poetically

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

10 posted 2004-04-02 01:21 PM

An incredible poem. Excellent, enjoyed reading it very much. It is so beautiful, flows so smoothly, exquisite. Thanks for sharing!

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