Open Poetry #31 |
Liaise Of Tides |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beloved These gifts combine the seas of restless bidding Finding out the all about connections fitting Sensitive in rise and fall away that changes play A shear of excess waves too tight to seam and pulled away Ruffles on the summer dress of morn to surf the sunny sighs Stepping in and out of the regress and pounding for the prize What could be good as gold upon the shores caresses Seems to foam in wanton smiles just as fast in vast recess And all this feeling is to gather at the lips like sated sand Every wave conveys the gentle longing in its open hand While you drown in welled capitulations given gold Though ocean deep, the spirit bold, warm engulf streams hold Copyright Kkh 4/2/04 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes so beautiful, it leaves a part of itself to dance for the sands that thirst for its touch beautiful sea song |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is a very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed the rhythm and tone. It certainly portrays your feelings on love and romance! What a kind soul you have! ^*Well done*^ ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I always enjoy a well written poem about the Ocean And this is one. Gloom |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This lovely and lilting poem rolls as rhythmically as the rolling tides... EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't think there is anything that you can't write about |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very pretty! |
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