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Within the Mind of Litature
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Within the Mind of Litature |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Circulate broadening evolutions Breath in the collaborator Thought provoking dimensions Cunning drinkers of sensual nature We are poets; we are one, twins of Some very successful predestined poise Silhouette of emotions, mentoring seamen Shhhhh...listen...a rare heartbeat of passion Taps our core, intrudes, taking us up up up and we surrender to this music Unto recognition of distinction Spilling over, waves of lavished Zen Scarcely known by any word which lends Of such a voice as humanity China-white poetic excellence Tracing a labyrinth inevitable.. Balance gaining meteoric skies Filtering all…towards directive ness Growing up within azure sea infinite Mirrored moments ride, artistically entwined We are larger, faster, louder now Drenched with eyes Of shining oils dancing smiles of annotations Sacred moves by mingling earthen rose Roar of union, sung by Gods Depicting Heaven’s long white gown There in a gargantuan ballroom of swans We share a potion of green invitations A meadow of life blood…whispering blends Secrets noticed in evening skies How utterly genius, quit mysterious How bedazzled…such this path, walk I I cannot move tomorrow, nor shall we In tenderness turn away, we are.... dancing like children, toward an authentic metaphor We are that air of July Muse of which decodes all meanings Building up the soul in harmony Metaphysical fluids, creating a hemisphere Another look, then another, we…beyond coming back The earth moves defining ornamentation Enshrouding our souls Like...human sense lamenting lullabies Following large sleeves of sound entwined Resonance so pure...spreading commodities Of humanness, spring, your arms of faith Simplicity is asserted into urgency Ensuring shapes, you are an aesthetic company Like a grand baroque of artful threads Mighty insignia, daylight dreams Noontime tides Night time moon... Echoes signify spiritual expressions from where we were, we know Somehow you know...becoming Powerless, nor resist Therein A richer inner life expressed thoughts exploding a prowess Theologian fires rage wild! Extensively… Nothing concerns...we absolutely suffer This intoxicating flicker This positive science of an artistic measure Wandering the garden of eternal bliss Eternal life...creation... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I went to pick out certain lines ...well, I'll just say this is a fine piece to read on an early morning for me...the birds and sun woke me and I couldn't get back to sleep... enjoyed this very much |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"creation..." ~ Yeppers! I do believe that you just summed it all up for us! lol Yours is a mind that must never sleep!   EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A wonderland of senses phrases enjoyed and a good friday to you. |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Superb, outstanding, Lee J you have a heart of purest gold and it comes brilliantly out in your script. Thanks sis Rene` |
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Crimson Moon Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 52NY, USA |
A magical journey through the soul of a writer. Simply beautiful. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You are a conductor of the fine music of words! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lee J: A marvelous depiction of that realm “With In The Mind of Literature.” You have painted this landscape from within your mind, and it is beautiful. Great write! JL |
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