Open Poetry #31 |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
billboards stole the sky looming overhead like demacles swords until they dropped and became storefronts the Queen will die! the faithful had cried they'd seen the signs and piece by piece building by building she did trading culture for commerce because humble doesn't sell on Bay polished and antiseptic chrome and lights the pout and preen of the egowhores *A lament of Queen St. Toronto [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-31-2004 03:01 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
as yogi would say hey its deja vu all over again so play ball, and welcome back raffi |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bellllooooooooo, welcome back! You KNOW how much I love this. Dory heh. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
It is good to feel a familiar fire. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yippee! It's old home week with you and our Gem back! It's great to read you again! Hope all is well in your world! EA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Raph It's good to see you and your poetry! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks inked thanks dixie hugs Dori lol thanks ice been following your work along with others always a pleasure Thanks Linda appreciate the warm welcome Martie thanks good to see you too 'Quantum materiae materietur marmota monax si marmota |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Glory Hallelujah! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I loved this Aenimal..You are a profound thinker and expertly put your thoughts into words.. As we grow older, and hopefully wiser What's important seems to change, It's not the money or material things, they become quite plain. I'd love to be a window, Across from a day care school, Watching kids play out life, Just doing the things kids do. Just being a simple window, Watching the day go bye Skyscapers going upwards, Ruin the view of the sky. Hey look over there! Little girls of peaches and cream, Having a tea party setting, And all of thier grown up dreams. Across the street in their "real" world, Little boys are running and winning, Venturing out of their protective backyards, Little lives just now beginning. See the old oak right out front? The wind bends back and forth. And look what it does to the pond over yonder, The ripples-white cap into shore. Yep, a window's what I wish I was, Watching the world go bye, No worries or problems with just one care, To get "Windexed" to clear my eyes. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hey Ed grins Thanks Toe, a nice wish indeed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's so good to see you back! *S* And with such excellence... I'm so glad! *S* |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Whoa! That's one heavy duty and super cool write! Enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do enjoy it when poets make me go peek... http://www.boldts.net/Tor5.shtml Thank you, Raph... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks suthern, grover YES Karilea that's it, one of my favourite spots too, that red buliding, used to be a greeeeat bookstore up top not sure if that's gone too now..sighs |
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