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A thing like the wind
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A thing like the wind |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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I empathize, truly, with the first man to have felt this…..thing That his compliment was more than accompaniment A feeling, akin to the wind at once, compelling and elusive With the force to sway forests and the substance of nothing An emotion, soft as a sunrise and sharper than flint How, with her, the primal thrustings slow, sweeten, and become music That within his shuddered release and her own trembling songs Came the knowledge that if and when this thing were ever to end Something inside him would assuredly break "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads. Melt me why don't you. Library... [I've been called an ice princess before...I could stand with some melting...  ]Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG!! Trembling here.... WOW!! .........Dang! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
a lovely twist on romance... *sigh* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keeper! keeper! keeper! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good writing......A pure in depth emotional trip. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You've gone and done it again Bro...thank you  it's going straight to my library. DarkSis Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"Came with the knowledge that if and when this thing were ever to end Something inside him would assuredly break" WOW. You certainly know the feeling of love and you depict this emotion so well. You are a true poet!! ^*Wonderful write*^ ^*-Kimberley-*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You've a powerful writer's voice... always enjoy your work-- it's always the best quality. Thanks for sharing! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This most certainly would sweep me off my feet. Here is my heart, treat it kindly. Beautiful poem. SG |
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