written to my best friend- please read

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Open Poetry #31

written to my best friend- please read

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2004-03-30 08:26 PM

dana my darling
im writing to you
to thank you for your support
with helping me through
when i feel i cant get up
and ive dug the whole too deep
to hear your words of wonder
builds a staircase thats not too steep
and with each smile, each hug
and all the joy you bring to me
i gain the strength to take another step
to climb out of this misery
and i know that one day
i'll be able to reach the top
and i'll have you to thank for it
when this depression comes to a stop
and anytime i feel likle dying
anytime i want to hide
i know that i'll get through it
with you by my side

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2004-03-31 12:38 PM

nice write and i would say hold on to your friends and always give them the credit they so richly deserve ... if we don't have friends and family what do we have?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-03-31 12:51 PM

beautiful tribute

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-06 07:19 PM

Kind words for an obviously kind person. Hello fellow Canadian.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-04-08 11:02 AM

I thought I had responded to this. It was very appreciative--something I feel is of utmost importance in any, any relationship, whether it be work or social. I liked reading your thoughts very much. I hope your friend reads this with tender smiles.
Sadelite

Rosalind Palafox

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5 posted 2004-04-12 04:18 AM

i felt the emotion pouring out of this poem. if this letter was written to me, id have tears pouring out of me. very very nice poem! such kind words you have to say!

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-04-12 01:46 PM

Very nice!
JL

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