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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-04-08 07:04 AM

As Your words fall,
upon my skin,
puddles of love,
I'm standing in,

Words you had written
beautiful I become
unbroken,unfrozen,

Caressing me
without one finger,
One becomes free,

Passionate, silky, velvet,
soft are the words felt,
when it rains,I melt,

Bathe me in your words,
let your love fall on me,
cover me with love,

Wash me all over,
let not one spot
remain untouched,

Heal these wounds,

Wash away the saddness,
cleanse my bitter heart,
release me from the madness,

Rain, pour down,
loves drops,
dripping all around,

Write your words,
paint me in your world,
your scene,

So I may put away my umbrella,
become beautiful,
and see the rainbow once again,

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-04-08 07:26 AM

This is a fine poem....of love...of your heart....thank you...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2004-04-08 07:31 AM

And You Rose, gave one fine compliment....rainbows do have their pot of gold at the end? gold?~Thank You

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-04-10 02:11 AM

ARH, this is a very pretty write
of romance.

Hugs,

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-10 06:03 AM

you are a hopeless romantic and I love it

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-04-10 08:11 PM

Silky...james

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-04-10 08:35 PM

Romantic Heart, this is absolutely one of your very best. I really enjoyed it!

vandana

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Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-04-11 08:13 PM

nice

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-04-12 09:56 AM

Such a beautiful shower of love regenerates the hearts powerfully.
Love, Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-04-12 02:01 PM

Lyrical and and full of beauty.

Eric

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