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Grover
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0 posted 2004-03-30 06:13 PM



A Mile Down The Road


rolling down the freeway
expensive way
in a corvette
she's a radish or carrot
or some kind of finger food
fingering her gelled hair
she is sort of post-punkish
my appetite whet/dry laughs--
traded, bartered through puckered lips
pothole suddenly appalls my imagination
like a drunk coming off a bender
her right fender rubs my tire

blowout.


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1 posted 2004-03-30 08:20 PM


blowout or sellout?
food for thought here

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2 posted 2004-03-30 08:58 PM


interesting comparison... enjoyed
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3 posted 2004-03-30 09:01 PM


I enjoyed another one, Grover!
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4 posted 2004-03-30 09:27 PM


enjoyed this Grover.  Chris

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5 posted 2004-03-31 03:49 AM


love the way you describe the scene
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