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Open Poetry #31

A Mile Down The Road

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-03-30 06:13 PM

A Mile Down The Road

rolling down the freeway
expensive way
in a corvette
she's a radish or carrot
or some kind of finger food
fingering her gelled hair
she is sort of post-punkish
my appetite whet/dry laughs--
traded, bartered through puckered lips
pothole suddenly appalls my imagination
like a drunk coming off a bender
her right fender rubs my tire

blowout.

©2004 Grover Gall

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-03-30 08:20 PM

blowout or sellout?

food for thought here

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-03-30 08:58 PM

interesting comparison... enjoyed

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

3 posted 2004-03-30 09:01 PM

I enjoyed another one, Grover!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-03-30 09:27 PM

enjoyed this Grover. Chris

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passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-03-31 03:49 AM

love the way you describe the scene

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