Open Poetry #31 |
In the silence of the streetlight |
jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
I went walking again last night in the silence, Tired of being home, tired of being alone, I’m Tired of pretending to still be in love with him. I am only harboring peace I guess in a land where I have been forgotten. I stood in front of your door I deeply breathed and sighed then I just kept going my own way. The dog kept me honest in my wake…… Trails and tribulations in my path to partake. Gladly I accept them as my own. To Love you again, would be unfair, But there you are motioning your come hither. Oh Yes, How loudly I can hear you Temptation echoes deep into the night And as I follow on in the silence of the streetlight I can hear heart your beaconing to me. At home once again, I crawl back into bed with out you to hold. Jennirey 2004 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A melancholy piece with the images very realistic and easily perceived. Nicely presented Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Loved it...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very cool write... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Im there with you I know all too well this type of feeling... and i enjoyed the way you conveyed it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now there's an idea...walking... but only when it gets warmer |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A good write... |
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