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An Ease of Breeze
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An Ease of Breeze |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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An Ease of Breeze For a brief moment, without hesitation, I discarded my name today, becoming, instead, a slip of breeze I traveled north, south, east, west looking for a soul in need of a caress. An open window invited me in, as a widow’s single tear was dried by this cool wind… I slipped along, finding a child, alone, and carried that one small voice to his mother’s ear… an upper gust, then spied from high a lonely sailor, his eye to the sky ~ I pushed away the clouds that hid the shoreline for which he searched… I blew by a man on a white sand beach, his cane writing a name deep in the sand ~ I blew the surf ankle deep leaving memory’s shell within the confines of his sandy heart… all that was left to be done before waning sun slipped the horizon, before I had to become me once more, was to carry a bluebird’s song north, south, east, west… then move your wind chimes one more time before I sighed away. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-30-2004 04:32 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"all that was left to be done before waning sun slipped the horizon, before I had to become me once more, was to carry a bluebird’s song north, south, east, west… then move your wind chimes one more time before I sighed away." Ahhh so it was this breeze that made my windchimes sing. Lovely lovely thoughts here Karilea. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And this enchanting breeze just touched my cheeks in a soft caress too .... Beautiful vision of the heart. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Be sure to astral travel down under next you do it again dear ok Beautiful M xx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thank you for this bluebird song. I needed to hear it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine....That was a beautiful trip to take with you on the breeze....I enjoyed the freedom of it all.....Thanks! Eric |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
The images painted in your words are so whimsical and lovely. I loved this Piece. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea this is such a breath of fresh air and I enjoyed the insight so much. Now I know who caressed my cheek today! Thank you ... hugs and luvs, Marti |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sweet and whimsical and charming |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
soooo creative, Karilea. Do you think I could do that if I discarded my name, too? How very clever. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sweet Karilea, you know I like this one! Oh, I would change my name and joint you in your escapades!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have a heart of gold |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Karilea... these words are the words of a true Angel! |
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