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Storybook Sisters |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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in childish glee glory chasing rainbow's end sponge grass meadow there beneath her heels as grass returns to clasp forever hidden path she made through the pasture of my mind leaving me with just a hint of where to go from here. we travel where the Rabbit's foot tracked among the leaves silently whispers caught our stall and in amaze we gazed upon redwoods tall and mushroomed clouds loomed before our sight here upon the path of paths and too soon darkness claimed it--night. bellybutton lint do not squint at Venus' light Pleiades beacons from miles away, as seven sisters take our hands another step dare we take shhhh, night creatures should not wake. eyelid curtains fringed with lash flutter drop the end of play asleep as book turns one last page wishing her upon her way keeping pace with footfall dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YIPPEE!! I love it!  Ya done made me smile real wide you two!  ~Hugging you both real tight~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You both have played beautifully here! Wow! Love, Margherita  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Absolutely Wonderful!! Keepin' this! Big Hugs, Chrislane  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"hint-hint-hint bellybutton lint do not squint at Venus' light Pleiades beacons from miles away, as seven sisters take our hands another step dare we take shhhh, night creatures should not wake. Luna lights the center spot eyelid curtains fringed with lash flutter drop the end of play asleep as book turns one last page wishing her upon her way keeping pace with footfall dreams." ```````````````````````````````````````  awesome ladies, absolutely awesome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and you know, m'dear, this came just at the right time, when I needed a little place to escape to, and I could not think to do it with anyone else in this latter part of March... but now I want to do it again! Thank you, my friend...thank you very much! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved this you ladies! Sisters need to stick together and you did it so well!  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Alice, Venus, the Pleiades, and Bella Luna too. Lovely! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well well Ladies..I just knew you'd both come up with something mystical. Nice to see you both out playing together it's a keeper a  for Kand a for K LOLBeauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. (by Virginia Woolf) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
my friends, fun and enchanting, both of you and this poem! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You two should do this more often....This is really exceptional and delightful. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! good job! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, I hope she and I will duet again soon...this was truly off the cuff and a wonderful break for me...I've been feeling a bit "restricted" lately! Thanks to everyone that read this, and walked that little path with us for just a moment...  |
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