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Open Poetry #31

Demon Called Doubt

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-03-30 10:14 AM

Within there is a demon
that’s hiding deep inside
holding onto your spirit
messes with your mind.

Feeding upon your fears
tries to break your will
keeping your thoughts racing
not allowing your mind to be still.

With it comes no rhyme or reason
gives no answers, remains hidden there
consuming each and every thought
reality of day turns into nightmares.

Slowly invading your soul
makes you want to shout
that little voice inside your head
a demon known as doubt.

Revised 3-30-04

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-03-30 10:16 AM

Even Jesus had his Thomas...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-30 11:09 AM

Hugging you and taking away your doubts sweet lady~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-03-30 11:12 AM

honey, this to shall pass, and perhaps is your intuitive nature's way of saying, stay away....or you can't have this! I dunno, but..go with your heart...mingled with your mind, and by all means, never compromise your beliefs for gain...b/c you might sell you soul...and it could be a whole lot worse...stay with your best friend, you...and never deceive her. Love and hugs...me

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-03-30 12:06 PM

Gentle Spirit
Good write, enjoyed.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-03-30 01:23 PM

Gentle Spirit, an excellent poem of wise words!