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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-03-29 03:49 PM



Sweet Circles Of Time
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Sweet circles of time
joyously now surround me
in dizzying merriment sublime
For in the turn of friendship’s key
you enter into this very circle of me
bringing your love in the softest sway
Holding now your hand ever so tightly
for I don’t take your friendship lightly
Let us both twirl our lives with a smile
for so much is surely to come our way
Gaily we shall swirl always together
Foreverly, then, for just one more
Positively gloriously adorned
in this friendship together
A rapture-filled day~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-03-29 03:52 PM


Oh how beautiful Marge!
One day..one day I will take the time to learn these shape poems.
Fantastic presentation and choice of words.
Hugs to you m'friend~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-29 03:52 PM


A beautiful display of loving words!
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-03-29 03:53 PM


May I have the pleasure of being first to tell you "awesome!"

TD


OK...may I be one of the first?  SMiles

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4 posted 2004-03-29 05:12 PM


Dear Marge:  This is incredible!  You are truly a master of your pen!

Love
Betty Lou

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Betty
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5 posted 2004-03-29 08:42 PM


Marge you are the best. I just love this.
Love ya,
Betty

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state of mind
6 posted 2004-03-29 09:48 PM



Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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7 posted 2004-03-29 11:28 PM


yes, it is sweet indeed
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8 posted 2004-03-30 03:23 AM


beautiful!
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9 posted 2004-03-30 03:42 PM


Inner and outer vision so beautifully displayed dear Marge.
Beauty and love so graciously combined.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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