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Crimson Moon
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 52
NY, USA

0 posted 2004-03-29 10:18 AM

I have a Dream
That my nephew is safe
He knows how much
we love him

I have a dream
That my niece will
never stops laughing
or dreaming

I have a dream
My mom will be happy
That she will find the peace
she so deserves

I have a dream
That money won’t matter
My family will learn
love is priceless

I have a dream
That I when I die
I’ll owe the living no regrets
and leave them no tears

For my American dream
was never wealth or perfection
only to be truly known
and loved anyway

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-03-29 10:26 AM

Crimson,
A good dream, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-29 10:28 AM

Noel, this is a lovely giving piece..
filled with heartfelt dreams.
Well done.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-29 10:30 AM

sweetly written

you have a good heart here

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-03-29 10:32 AM

CM

This is a wonderful dream!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-03-29 10:33 AM

With your attitude
your dreams will surely
come true!

Crimson Moon
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 52
NY, USA

6 posted 2004-03-29 10:35 AM

Thank you. It started out as homework for a discussion on the American Dream. I know I'm barely here and I don't talk nearly as much as I should but I get caught up in the poems and lose my voice.

You write so passionately.

Noël

A secret place high atop the forest hills and valleys touched by all you have been and content to be all that you are.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-03-29 11:48 AM

Happy to read you. Welcome to Passions.
Enjoyed your write.
ThisDiamond

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-03-29 12:13 PM

Wishing you the sweetest dreams, and may they come true for you. I enjoyed this soulful write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-03-29 12:28 PM

Noel, my soul sister...you are just beautiful

I think it's a dream that we all have...and whatever happens, I will always love you for who you are. You're stuck with me too

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-03-29 01:24 PM

I think you and I have crossed paths in this dream -- good one!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

11 posted 2004-03-29 06:15 PM

Best dream a person could have: well written!

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